Storm of Passion: A Short Story

Storm of Passion: A Short Story - Dustin Adrian Rhodes This m/m short story just didn't hold my interest. I also didn't like the style of writing with run-on sentences and sentence fragments (not to mention editing errors and oversights). The POV shifts didn't work well for me, either. I thought the backgrounds for the characters were good; the execution just didn't do it for me. Nonetheless, a free read, so 2 stars... I appreciate the generosity of these authors for providing us with so much great content for free.

Note: This short story can be found as part of the M/M group's FREE Don't Read In The Closet, Volume 1 compilation: Download It Here